tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post5035050914611830457..comments2023-06-02T05:16:58.734-04:00Comments on S A Check: STEIN #17S.A. Checkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-87058307882907197812014-05-03T10:32:31.089-04:002014-05-03T10:32:31.089-04:00I haven't seen the scene that everyone Peter a...I haven't seen the scene that everyone Peter and JC recognized, but I do love the cinematic feels to this snippet. It's framed very well and you've managed to make the reader feel like they are seeing shots of these moments from different camera angles. Pretty effin neat. J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-51549526236262755942014-04-28T18:42:22.206-04:002014-04-28T18:42:22.206-04:00What do they call that? Deja-you-seen-it? It'...What do they call that? Deja-you-seen-it? It's really rather neat that you and Peter picked up on it with so few sentences. Hopefully you'll enjoy where it goes from here.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-24133472265720876242014-04-28T18:40:21.092-04:002014-04-28T18:40:21.092-04:00Thanks! I'm loving the new fifteen sentence l...Thanks! I'm loving the new fifteen sentence limit - I actually did a scene break - in a snippet! S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-27668538499855517022014-04-28T18:39:03.225-04:002014-04-28T18:39:03.225-04:00He has a tendency to wander...
He has a tendency to wander...<br />S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-54151766661823747632014-04-28T18:37:12.626-04:002014-04-28T18:37:12.626-04:00Yep, that's definitely an influence here, Pete...Yep, that's definitely an influence here, Peter. It's such a classic scene - I'm glad you picked up on that vibe. Now for a little twist.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-15232341794592280872014-04-26T14:23:22.204-04:002014-04-26T14:23:22.204-04:00I KNOW THIS SCENE!!
What a great nod to your ins...I KNOW THIS SCENE!! <br /><br />What a great nod to your inspiration. JC Casselshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12359245589507445547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-63140770349917613012014-04-26T14:01:19.020-04:002014-04-26T14:01:19.020-04:00Great snippet. Lots of cliffhangers to digest and ...Great snippet. Lots of cliffhangers to digest and look forward to their later revelations.T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-49429019782912409322014-04-26T12:13:08.312-04:002014-04-26T12:13:08.312-04:00How can you lose somebody that big? smh Some peopl...How can you lose somebody that big? smh Some people.Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-14600829089278340882014-04-26T05:23:16.386-04:002014-04-26T05:23:16.386-04:00I'm sure it isn't accidental that you'...I'm sure it isn't accidental that you're evoking the James Whale Frankenstein film from 1931 - reading the first section reminded me of the scene from the film where the monster approaches a little girl. I'm confident Stein isn't going to throw Trudy into a lake, but I'm more worried what everyone else is going to do...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.com