tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post7583808129461828720..comments2023-06-02T05:16:58.734-04:00Comments on S A Check: Science Fiction Fantasy Snippet S.A. Checkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-75485088743961599672013-01-24T08:34:22.097-05:002013-01-24T08:34:22.097-05:00I'm guessing Mary has good reason to believe i...I'm guessing Mary has good reason to believe in ghosts.Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-2875084457172652242013-01-21T10:21:28.145-05:002013-01-21T10:21:28.145-05:00Gayle, I was waiting for someone to pick up on tha...Gayle, I was waiting for someone to pick up on that and mention it. . Glad you liked it. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-4909703466303811392013-01-21T10:19:14.743-05:002013-01-21T10:19:14.743-05:00Thanks Ann! Everyone seems to enjoy the ghost tie...Thanks Ann! Everyone seems to enjoy the ghost tie in. Appreciate the comments. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-33306216171646060652013-01-21T07:51:57.236-05:002013-01-21T07:51:57.236-05:00Great dialogue. Like the line about the parents ha...Great dialogue. Like the line about the parents having a sixth sense. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039391701819796271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-8348140000874131822013-01-20T23:07:13.646-05:002013-01-20T23:07:13.646-05:00Oh! A Ghost! Now I want to know what she's see...Oh! A Ghost! Now I want to know what she's seen. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-80493131022805836612013-01-20T12:33:49.799-05:002013-01-20T12:33:49.799-05:00Tara, then the snippet had done its job. Ha. Than...Tara, then the snippet had done its job. Ha. Thanks for the comments and more to come. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-65198430326874692932013-01-19T23:55:13.390-05:002013-01-19T23:55:13.390-05:00I want to know what ghost experiences she's ha...I want to know what ghost experiences she's had :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-25708798409233626142013-01-19T23:02:37.066-05:002013-01-19T23:02:37.066-05:00Sue, Mary has some dark secrets of her own. Sam d...Sue, Mary has some dark secrets of her own. Sam doesn't realize the full extent of his yet. That changes after the bridge. Thanks!S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-63297532796188279292013-01-19T21:09:45.975-05:002013-01-19T21:09:45.975-05:00Sound like she's met a few ghosts and regrette...Sound like she's met a few ghosts and regretted it.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-1562826343489295772013-01-19T13:56:33.754-05:002013-01-19T13:56:33.754-05:00Thanks, Peter. There's a bit of growing histo...Thanks, Peter. There's a bit of growing history even as young as they are and they're both harbouring their own secrets. Looking forward to playing it out. Appreciate the comments. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-63662359982103479892013-01-19T12:24:55.923-05:002013-01-19T12:24:55.923-05:00Lovely sense of the camaraderie between the pair h...Lovely sense of the camaraderie between the pair here. You write very good dialogue. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-59676196632568430172013-01-19T11:58:44.168-05:002013-01-19T11:58:44.168-05:00Ha. These two characters will play off one anothe...Ha. These two characters will play off one another for the rest of the story and their relationship grows. Is it next Saturday yet? Totally enjoying sharing these snippets and what an awesome community built here. Maybe we need a SciFiFan Wednesday to tide us over for everyone's work? Two sentence Tuesdays?S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-33935084047329595742013-01-19T11:53:06.239-05:002013-01-19T11:53:06.239-05:00Thanks JM! I love to foreshadow. The sixth sense ...Thanks JM! I love to foreshadow. The sixth sense reference was intentional. I'm hoping to take them in some unexpected directions. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-73647903072256340442013-01-19T11:51:10.784-05:002013-01-19T11:51:10.784-05:00Thanks JC! I'm excited with how it's deve...Thanks JC! I'm excited with how it's developing and I'm looking forward to sharing more and revealing some plot. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-3594958400646499842013-01-19T11:49:46.088-05:002013-01-19T11:49:46.088-05:00Yikes!! Ghosts!! I love the chemistry between the ...Yikes!! Ghosts!! I love the chemistry between the two characters. Gimme more now... :DTK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-20009519384432063532013-01-19T11:23:24.617-05:002013-01-19T11:23:24.617-05:00You can read into this snippet to learn a lot abou...You can read into this snippet to learn a lot about these characters and their history, as well as things to come. Some very nice foreshadowing, S.A.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-89806107356971630742013-01-19T11:22:13.675-05:002013-01-19T11:22:13.675-05:00Love the creepiness factor. Great dialog.Love the creepiness factor. Great dialog.JC Casselshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12359245589507445547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-42108537039563741342013-01-19T10:55:30.050-05:002013-01-19T10:55:30.050-05:00Thanks, T.M. I enjoy writing dialogue more than n...Thanks, T.M. I enjoy writing dialogue more than narrative but I try to throw in some descriptors along the way to rather than simply he said / she saids in the tags. I appreciate you taking the time to comment.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-50845524895151994702013-01-19T10:53:40.424-05:002013-01-19T10:53:40.424-05:00Ghosts are part of the story but it goes a few dif...Ghosts are part of the story but it goes a few different directions. I'm glad you're enjoying where its going here. I'm going to try to use SciFiFan Sat's to keep it moving and update weekly. Thanks, Misa.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-1437068614969169092013-01-19T10:47:41.657-05:002013-01-19T10:47:41.657-05:00That's what I say! Ha! Thanks for commenting...That's what I say! Ha! Thanks for commenting.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-41539652313542725102013-01-19T08:30:39.292-05:002013-01-19T08:30:39.292-05:00And this is why I love dialogue far more...one can...And this is why I love dialogue far more...one can get quite far more information on the characters out of this than the equivalent number of narrative sentences. Great snippet!T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-38421895267135146792013-01-19T08:07:20.184-05:002013-01-19T08:07:20.184-05:00Ooh, it's a ghost story! Not read a good ghost...Ooh, it's a ghost story! Not read a good ghost story in forever.Misa Buckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16571385607998323197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-33674212025413572372013-01-19T08:04:26.733-05:002013-01-19T08:04:26.733-05:00'What's that supposed to mean,' indeed...'What's that supposed to mean,' indeed! Scary houses, ghosts... what more can you ask for?Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.com