tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post7832181500878868556..comments2023-06-02T05:16:58.734-04:00Comments on S A Check: Stein Snippet #3S.A. Checkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-51807391353880455352013-10-12T18:43:04.315-04:002013-10-12T18:43:04.315-04:00Run away, run away, Annie! Great descriptive narra...Run away, run away, Annie! Great descriptive narrative, especially the last line!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-22047391715331200072013-10-12T17:18:10.878-04:002013-10-12T17:18:10.878-04:00Thanks! I figured I'd try to put a different ...Thanks! I figured I'd try to put a different spin on the genre some. And you're right, I can't say I've ever heard a drain cleaner drinking dog being choked (and hope I never do) but I think it set the tone. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-72221333951717353442013-10-12T17:09:58.979-04:002013-10-12T17:09:58.979-04:00Sue! You gave it away!! Remind to stay ahead of ...Sue! You gave it away!! Remind to stay ahead of you if we're ever running away from a horde of hungry zombies. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-66538913954255737932013-10-12T17:08:00.263-04:002013-10-12T17:08:00.263-04:00They do everything else, why not climb. I think I&...They do everything else, why not climb. I think I'll have them tap dance and juggle next week. Maybe Annie can beat them in a high stakes round of Texas Hold'em. Thanks for the comment, Patrick.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-11950287011165649942013-10-12T16:31:19.477-04:002013-10-12T16:31:19.477-04:00I figured, why not. And I didn't know you wer...I figured, why not. And I didn't know you were in the BwaHaHa evil writer's guild - I've never seen you at the meetings. I'll look next week. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-89725531391257659362013-10-12T16:28:18.747-04:002013-10-12T16:28:18.747-04:00Thanks. I'm having fun with this. Going snippe...Thanks. I'm having fun with this. Going snippet to snippet is fun. I hope for Annie's sake I don't come down with writer's block. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-360114604695096772013-10-12T16:25:19.035-04:002013-10-12T16:25:19.035-04:00Thanks, Peter. I kinda liked that descript myself....Thanks, Peter. I kinda liked that descript myself. Let's hope Annie has something up her sleeve, like maybe an assault rifle. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-67882530601300733752013-10-12T15:03:37.748-04:002013-10-12T15:03:37.748-04:00Great snippet...love the last line. I'm also a...Great snippet...love the last line. I'm also a big fan of comparisons to things that you probably don't know about for sure (choking a dog who drank drain cleaner), but could have a good idea from the description. :-)T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-57697358522791135762013-10-12T15:00:49.991-04:002013-10-12T15:00:49.991-04:00Toss the dumpster lurker out to the zombies?Toss the dumpster lurker out to the zombies?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-66561582320818939782013-10-12T13:57:59.882-04:002013-10-12T13:57:59.882-04:00Oh, crap! Is there a ladder nearby? But, wait. Can...Oh, crap! Is there a ladder nearby? But, wait. Can these zombies climb? Great snippet! Lots of good descriptions in this one.Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-58466712580591829282013-10-12T12:40:51.221-04:002013-10-12T12:40:51.221-04:00Talking zombies--that actually makes them scarier!...Talking zombies--that actually makes them scarier! Pretty food indeed. <br /><br />Great snippet, and very relevant to this month :) Bwahahahahaha!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-16885535023105916982013-10-12T10:00:50.500-04:002013-10-12T10:00:50.500-04:00Oh, what great descriptive narrative. And being lo...Oh, what great descriptive narrative. And being locked out of an escape route when the hordes are coming. Yikes! Love this piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10323295387690443559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8222321118814028148.post-71048567740114459932013-10-12T06:09:55.178-04:002013-10-12T06:09:55.178-04:00Eeek! Annie is in big trouble! I love the descript...Eeek! Annie is in big trouble! I love the description of the voice of the lurker in the dumpster - really evocative. Great snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.com