Friday, January 30, 2015

Maxx Fragg, V.P.I. SFFSat snippet - 01/31/15


Welcome back to another edition of everyone’s favorite weekend read along episode of Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. It’s a place where writers of sci-fi and fantasy get to share some of their writing snippets and hopefully a few fans of the genres can check out some cool excerpts. Make sure you make your way over to the main site by clicking here – SciFiFanSat – and enjoy all the site has to offer. You’ll be glad you did. This week I’m continuing to share from my work Maxx Fragg, V.P.I. as Maxx and his partner Tane are setting up to perform an exorcism for a young couple who’ve hired them to extricate an unwanted visitor.
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Debbie raised her hand and asked, “Would it be okay if I just darted to the lady’s room first?”

“The process has already started,” Maxx said.

“But…” Debbie persisted.

Maxx secured the detecting rod in his bag and withdrew a long barreled shotgun with a plastic cylinder attached to each side. “You can put your hand down now.”

Pumping the stock, a neon gel flowed through the tubing running the length of the barrel. Maxx hit a button and the liquid energized, bubbling as it flowed the course of the weapon. The couple simultaneously pulled their feet off the floor.

It was time for Maxx to set up the final act.

“You’re entirely safe as long as my partner and I are here,” Maxx said. 

“They’re professionals, babe.” Travis reassured her with a half-hearted smile.

Debbie dug her nails into the couch.

They needed to get through the rest of this job without any more hitches. Debbie was on the verge of crying and Maxx knew Tane’s concentration shattered at the sight of a girl’s tears.

Will they get more than they bargained for? Are Maxx and Tane up to the task? Tune in next week for another round of Sci-Fi snippet goodness and find out. As always, comments are not only welcome but truly appreciated. Enjoy the weekend and see you in seven.

9 comments:

  1. I boggled slightly at the shotgun - not the traditional exorcist's hardware! You paint a really cool picture of the scene - the only question is whether it is going to work...

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    1. Thanks, Peter - little late with the return comments - where does a week go? If everything worked like it was supposed to, what would be the fun of writing?

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  2. "You're entirely safe..."? hehe I've heard that before. Let's see how this turns out.

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  3. "You're entirely safe..."? hehe I've heard that before. Let's see how this turns out.

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    1. That's right up there with, "It's a trap" "I hate snakes" and "what could possibly go wrong?"

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  4. Of course there's more. Where's the fun otherwise!

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    1. Maybe we need to try that exercise - a complete story in snippet length. Write that novel - in fifteen sentences or less. I like it!

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  5. Gee, Debbie is worse than my little monsters! Although they'd be much to excited by all this to want to visit the little monsters' room. :P

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    1. It's entirely against proper exorcism etiquette to request a bathroom break after starting. She must not have read the instruction sheet. Maybe that's the angle I'm missing, Pippa? Prepubescent Paranormal Pugilists!

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