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“I think I’d rather see what’s coming,” Travis said as he pulled
a cushion on his lap.
“You expecting a pillow fight?” Maxx asked, dropping the
equipment bag slung over his shoulder.
Debbie jumped. “What are you going to do with that?”
“What I’m being paid to do.” Maxx nodded across the room to his
partner, who shook his head in disapproval. Bending next to the couch, Maxx slowly
unzipped the bag. He was close enough to see the goose bumps on Debbie’s arm
rise with each click.
“I don’t care what it takes, just get that thing out of my
house,” Travis said.
Ahhhhh….the
old monster in the closet syndrome. So is Maxx part hero – part conman – a bit
of both? Check back next week for another exciting excerpt from the novel’s
opening. If you want to jump ahead, you can check out the entire first chapter
posted over on GOODREADS and if
you REALLY want to jump ahead (I’m okay with it, really), you can pick up your
own copy of the book by clicking over to my publisher INK SMITH PUBLISHING or at AMAZON where it’s available in
both eBook and print. Thanks for reading along – see you in seven!
This is good - grabs the reader and has enough little details to keep us reading. The line about watching goosebumps "rise with every click" is very effective.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Peter! I liked the goosebumps visual too - glad it worked for you!
DeleteDoesn't Maxx realize that pillows and bedsheets keep the monsters away? That's why kids hide in their beds every night and horror movie victims cover their heads.
ReplyDeleteYou're right - that's why checking the thread count on your bedding is so important. What's even scarier is that I know there is a thread count on sheets.
DeleteSounds more of a conman to me, suck us skeptics in gradually.
ReplyDeleteHa. I'm working on it. Hopefully Maxx's well runs a little deeper than deception.
DeleteGreat snippet. I think I'm going to enjoy this story...
ReplyDeleteThanks! It's been getting some great response so far!
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