Friday, September 4, 2015

Maxx Fragg,VPI - Pillow fights and Poltergeists

Putting a little friction in your science fiction every weekend – that’s what we’re all about here at Science Fiction and Fantasy Saturday. We’re trying to make the weekend a little brighter with some great writing snippets from a great group of authors and writers who love the genres just as much as you do. Stop over at the main site for all of this week’s picking and you’ll see what I mean by clicking HERE. This week’s already been an exciting one for me with the fresh off the press release of my new novel – Maxx Fragg, V.P.I., so I’ve decided to share another excerpt from the beginning of the book. If you haven’t already – stop over at my website SACheck.com to check out the book! Read on!
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“I think I’d rather see what’s coming,” Travis said as he pulled a cushion on his lap.
“You expecting a pillow fight?” Maxx asked, dropping the equipment bag slung over his shoulder.
Debbie jumped. “What are you going to do with that?”
“What I’m being paid to do.” Maxx nodded across the room to his partner, who shook his head in disapproval. Bending next to the couch, Maxx slowly unzipped the bag. He was close enough to see the goose bumps on Debbie’s arm rise with each click.
“I don’t care what it takes, just get that thing out of my house,” Travis said.
“You’ll be ghost free in no time.” Maxx knew his clients needed to believe he could make it better, take away their fears. If only it was that simple. Everyone wanted to name the night, put a label on their personal horrors. He wished someone could shut the door to the monsters in his own closet.

Ahhhhh….the old monster in the closet syndrome. So is Maxx part hero – part conman – a bit of both? Check back next week for another exciting excerpt from the novel’s opening. If you want to jump ahead, you can check out the entire first chapter posted over on GOODREADS and if you REALLY want to jump ahead (I’m okay with it, really), you can pick up your own copy of the book by clicking over to my publisher INK SMITH PUBLISHING or at AMAZON where it’s available in both eBook and print. Thanks for reading along – see you in seven!

8 comments:

  1. This is good - grabs the reader and has enough little details to keep us reading. The line about watching goosebumps "rise with every click" is very effective.

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    1. Thanks, Peter! I liked the goosebumps visual too - glad it worked for you!

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  2. Doesn't Maxx realize that pillows and bedsheets keep the monsters away? That's why kids hide in their beds every night and horror movie victims cover their heads.

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    1. You're right - that's why checking the thread count on your bedding is so important. What's even scarier is that I know there is a thread count on sheets.

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  3. Sounds more of a conman to me, suck us skeptics in gradually.

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    1. Ha. I'm working on it. Hopefully Maxx's well runs a little deeper than deception.

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  4. Great snippet. I think I'm going to enjoy this story...

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    1. Thanks! It's been getting some great response so far!

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