Friday, July 27, 2012

Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday Snippet #3


         Hi again, all.  The bustle of summer keeps everyone extra busy but I wanted to get back into the mix and submit another snippet from the GreenGrass universe.  I appreciate all the comments from the previous entries and look forward to participating in this week’s fun.  Just for the sake of catching up, the past entries from my novel Welcome to GreenGrass had John Traveller, misplaced police officer from Earth, trapped in the alien city of GreenGrass and saving a newbie from a couple of street predators before explaining the new rules the city lives by.  Thanks for reading and make sure you check out all the other great Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday contributors!  



          As he walked back towards the market district, Traveller wondered how many times had he done this?  How many inserts had he escorted from their impromptu births into GreenGrass to whatever new section of this town they’d eventually call home?

          He crossed through the Technologist quarter with their shiny skyscrapers scaling up to the top of the dome, interlaced with corridors and walkways between the glass and steel behemoths, like one huge computer component entwined with wire and cable.  Hover crafts and humanoids harnessing personal propulsion systems floated down the street as if putting their feet to the ground would be an affront to them.  Traveller preferred moving around the city on his own power.  While everyone else opted for cyber enhancements and magical trinkets to help them get by, he was determined to stay the same as when he first portalled through.  If he allowed himself to become too immersed in the culture, he feared getting lost in this new life.
          He passed the twin offices of Kolan and Strakus.  The lights were dim in the upper floors of one of the towers but the other bustled with activity and burned bright, which seemed odd at this time of the setting.  Traveller felt the rhythic hum of generators and processors that kept this section of GreenGrass running.  Exiting the tech sector, he made his way back into the market, passed where he rescured Jerry earlier, and finally stopped in front of a brick and wooden two story structure.  Home.

14 comments:

  1. Good stuff...enjoyed the descriptions of the neighborhood.

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    1. Thanks for the comments, T.M. - always appreciated.

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  2. Very nice. Like TM said, love the details. I'd definitely get this. So...when's it being released?

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    1. Thanks TK. I really appreciate the comments and interest. An announcement for the book's release and by who is coming out in the very near future. I'll be sure to share it here as soon as I can, probably again and again and again.

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  3. I like the details in this excerpt. I'm becoming more and more intrigued with the story.

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    1. Much obliged Patrick. I'm looking forward to sharing more snippets in the coming months and reading all the great excerpts from everyone else. Thanks.

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  4. Great world-building. What a wonderful set up. The premise is intriguing.

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    1. Thanks JC. I loved crafting this world and I'm excited that everyone seems to be enjoying it.

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  5. Wonderful description, and nice weaving in of information on your character!

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  6. Thanks Alexa. It's all in the details, right? I appreciate you taking the time to check it out.

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  7. I love the way this world looks. And the terms you sue to describe it. As said before, great worldbuilding and characterization. It's a great read all around. Can't wait to see more about GreenGrass.

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  8. Thanks JM, we really are the first initial brigade around here. I'm really excited about this project and it's going to be a fun process watching it mature. As always, your comments mean a lot to me.

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  10. Thanks, Heidi. I'm having a lot of fun with it and this is a great site to get some feedback from some great writers.

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