Friday, October 18, 2013

Stein Snippet #4


        Hi all!  Welcome to another Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday.  What we have here…is not a failure to communicate.  It’s a band of authors and writers who enjoy sharing snippets of their various science fiction and fantasy works, which equates to good readin’ fun.  I’ve been sharing from a WIP story I’m writing just for the SFFSAT crowd, still untitled at this point.  To catch everyone up to speed – Annie is trapped in an alley and a zombie horde is hot on her heels.  Nowhere to run, and there’s something creepy in the dumpster.  Not her best night.  I hope you enjoy.  Please stop over at the main site – scififansat.blogspot.com to check out all the great snippets contributed by an even greater group of writers over there.
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          When Annie first learned the dead could talk, she cursed every zombie movie she’d ever watched.  It wasn’t creepy enough to have animated corpses hunting down every beating heart they could catch a whiff of, but the color commentary they spewed while doing it sent extra chills down her spine.  A limited vocabulary at best, Annie felt their words were more verbalizing some kind of primal urges than actually looking to carry on a conversation but it still freaked her out.

          A second zombie collided with its orange suited cohort, smashing its face into the wall.  One by one, more of the pack filtered into the alley until over a dozen hunting corpses sniffed wildly into the night air.  Mostly men, a few women, and one child no more than fourteen, scoured for the source of their anticipation.  More eyes focused on Annie as she stood braced against the alley wall.

          Illness and old age had become the new American dream and the prospect of making it through any given day proved a crap shoot.  Still, when death stared you in the eye, you were never ready.

          Hope you enjoyed.  If you could, leave a comment in passing.  They’re always appreciated and help fuel the writing process.  Have a great weekend! 

8 comments:

  1. Ohhh, the dead can talk! Creepy indeed. I love Annie's observations. Good stuff!

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    1. Thanks, T.K. - just trying something different to keep it entertaining. This week - they DANCE! just kidding.

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  2. I like how death can literally stare you in the eye in this case. More zombie action please :)

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    1. One order of zombie fun - coming up! In a few days...service is kinda slow. Guess I blew my tip, huh?

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  3. Zombies are bad enough. Talking zombies...ack! Is it wrong for me to ask for more?

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  4. I love the phrase about the new American dream - great stuff!

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  5. Thanks, Peter! That was one of those lines that just kinda generate while you write.

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