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The
creature stumbled over to the window and forced down the bile growing in his
throat as he watched the darkened street running through the quiet residential
neighborhood below. The anguish in his
face distorted in the glass as he turned his attention to the cloud covered
moon, regarding the dead star as one would a long lost friend.
“There’s
an extended un-edited cut and I’m so downloading it.” The young boy called out behind him.
Sighing, the creature rested his hand against the window pane as images
from the prior weeks flooded his memories.
The
setup was the same as the countless thousands before, a darkened bedroom, a
slowly opening closet door with just a hint of un-oiled hinges, and the ominous
cast of a shadow stretching towards a young child’s bed. Perfected by the screams of generations, it
was the stage for his aria of terror.
Looming over top the huddled mass of blankets, his fangs shimmered in
the glow of his hungry eyes. Tearing away
the façade of protection, the creature howled directly into the grinning face
of a certain geometrically shaped cartoon character printed atop the empty
pillow.
That’s when he felt the first impact pinging
against the side of his face.
Poor monsters. they have a hard time competing with the realities of today, let along the TV cartoons.
ReplyDeleteThe bar had been set so high, you have to wonder what's next. Maybe it's better not to think about it. Ha. Thanks, Sue!
DeleteI'm starting to feel bad for the little guy...the monster, that is.
ReplyDeleteWasn't that a Rolling Stone song, Sympathy for the Closet Monster. Maybe a Weird Al re-make. Tune in next week for more torture but for who?
DeleteI figured he might be on the end of being taken advantage of, but this is starting to sound less amusing and more depressing. :( It's like seeing a better written Monsters Inc, but dark. I hope he can free himself soon!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I can guarantee is that there definitely is an ending. Ha. Thanks, Jalisa!
DeleteAhh...the classic pillow/stuffed toy in the bed ruse. Poor monster.
ReplyDeleteThey say it gets worse before better. We'll see what's in store for old horn head. Thanks!
Delete"...regarding the dead star as one would a long lost friend."
ReplyDeleteWhat a great line. This is an intriguing story!
Thanks, Gayle. I liked that line too.
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