Friday, August 2, 2013

Snips And Snails #6


 
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          The creature stumbled over to the window and forced down the bile growing in his throat as he watched the darkened street running through the quiet residential neighborhood below.  The anguish in his face distorted in the glass as he turned his attention to the cloud covered moon, regarding the dead star as one would a long lost friend. 

          “There’s an extended un-edited cut and I’m so downloading it.”  The young boy called out behind him.

          Sighing, the creature rested his hand against the window pane as images from the prior weeks flooded his memories.

          The setup was the same as the countless thousands before, a darkened bedroom, a slowly opening closet door with just a hint of un-oiled hinges, and the ominous cast of a shadow stretching towards a young child’s bed.  Perfected by the screams of generations, it was the stage for his aria of terror.  Looming over top the huddled mass of blankets, his fangs shimmered in the glow of his hungry eyes.  Tearing away the façade of protection, the creature howled directly into the grinning face of a certain geometrically shaped cartoon character printed atop the empty pillow.

          That’s when he felt the first impact pinging against the side of his face.

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10 comments:

  1. Poor monsters. they have a hard time competing with the realities of today, let along the TV cartoons.

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    1. The bar had been set so high, you have to wonder what's next. Maybe it's better not to think about it. Ha. Thanks, Sue!

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  2. I'm starting to feel bad for the little guy...the monster, that is.

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    1. Wasn't that a Rolling Stone song, Sympathy for the Closet Monster. Maybe a Weird Al re-make. Tune in next week for more torture but for who?

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  3. I figured he might be on the end of being taken advantage of, but this is starting to sound less amusing and more depressing. :( It's like seeing a better written Monsters Inc, but dark. I hope he can free himself soon!

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    1. One thing I can guarantee is that there definitely is an ending. Ha. Thanks, Jalisa!

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  4. Ahh...the classic pillow/stuffed toy in the bed ruse. Poor monster.

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    1. They say it gets worse before better. We'll see what's in store for old horn head. Thanks!

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  5. "...regarding the dead star as one would a long lost friend."

    What a great line. This is an intriguing story!

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  6. Thanks, Gayle. I liked that line too.

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