Welcome to another writing snippet contribution for Science Fiction Saturday Saturday. I hope everyone’s been enjoying Sam’s adventures from my WIP – Myth-In-Law and have followed along as Sam tries to get this mysterious book of his open. I hope you enjoy this week’s snippet enough to leave a comment or two along the way. They really help to gauge how well the story is moving along. Please take some time to check out ALL the great writing happening over at the main site – scififansat.blogspot.com. A lot of talented writers contribute every week and provide some great weekend reading.
Jumping from his chair, Sam dashed
between two of the shelves that comprised the Livingwood family library. Books held a special place in Sam’s
heart. Every week for nearly five years
after Sam’s dad disappeared, he and his grandfather travelled to flea markets
and garage sales, scouring boxes and car trunks for rare volumes. He brushed his hand down a row of books,
picking one from the stacks; The Sketch
Book of Geoffrey Crayon, Gent.
Sam’s dad credited Washington Irving,
who wrote under the pseudonym of Crayon, with helping to bring American
literature to the masses. He opened the
collection of short stories to the well-worn thumb marked beginning to The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. Sam remembered sitting with his dad in that
same room, reading passages by firelight on snowed in winter nights but those memories
became harder to recall. Flipping
through the book, he scoured the pages for hand written note in the margins, anything
that may hold a hidden meaning.
Disgusted, Sam slammed the book shut before
noticing a tear in the binding and a glint of metal inside.
“No way.”
Intriguing!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I intrigue to please.
DeleteWay!
ReplyDeleteParty on, Cary!
DeleteCan't wait for next week. What is this 'metal' of which you speak?
ReplyDeleteAww. It's a Dorito. How'd that get in there?
DeleteGreat ending to the snippet...way to pull off the cliffhanger.
ReplyDeleteHere at Snippet-Cliffhangers-R-Us, we strive to maintain customer satisfaction. Thanks!
DeleteWell done. I'm just reading casually along and then just like the Coyote in the old cartoons, CLANG! into the metal wall. :)
ReplyDeleteI don't know if head trauma is covered under my writer's insurance. Ill get back to you. Thanks for the comments!
DeleteNo WAY!! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteTo quote Mr. Caffrey "Way!" Thanks, J.C.
DeleteWhat is it? WHAT IS IT?! Great way to sneak that in.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Patrick. Maybe another eight or nine snippets and he'll finally get the dang thing open. Ha. Next week's installment - a quick Soduko challenge!
DeleteSeriously? You end it there!? lol
ReplyDeleteIt's in my contract S.C. I have to end the snippet at a pivotal point. I also get three 15 minute breaks and I'm off President's Day. Union rules.
ReplyDeleteMore than one book, I gather.
ReplyDeleteTwo books, the one given by the human twister and the second is from Sam's family library.
DeleteWay! (I know, Caffrey beat me to the punch, AGAIN. Whatever.) I want to know what happens next, but I'm also suppressing my rage that someone would deface a rare book.
ReplyDeleteIt's still funny the second time! I wondered if anyone would have an issue with the literary vandalism. There are extreme circumstances. Maybe just a warning this time.
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